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Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Content Metaphor Poem

This is the poem I wrote for school, specifically English. It's a metaphor poem, and it's on being content. 


When I’m content I’m a flower soaking up the sun.
I’m at peace, I cast my worries aside, and to your arms I run.
I’m at ease with myself,
To be happy I don’t need this worlds’ wealth.
I knew it wouldn’t be long until I was right where I belong. 

I would love constructive criticism on this. :) 

~Emma 

3 comments:

  1. I like it :) it's good being content.

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  2. I really like that Emma! I especially like the line "When I'm content I'm a flower soaking up the sun." :D

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  3. Thanks Danica and Kate! =) It took me a long time to come up with metaphors!

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